Verbal Feedback Post

After reviewing my coursework, Mr Farr said I needed to;

• Analyse another British film for my homework research task, as I did 2 posters, DVD covers, trailers and magazines for one British film.
• Also, to add more detail to my analysis of existing products and link in theories such as Propp's character types, binary oppositions and the codes. 
• When describing my target audience, I need to also identify who my secondary audience is and then say that a large percentage of the target audience will be students but it will also appeal to workers and those doing apprenticeships and then consider where they are placed on the JICNAR scale. 
• Also, in terms of my target audience, I need to say why my film will appeal to a certain genre or age group.
• In my narrative ideas, I need to focus more on the whole film, with the start, middle and end, and linking that to the disequilibrium and disruption etc rather than just focusing on the trailer for the film.